Wednesday, January 12, 2022

My Clerihew poem!

 Bula Vinaka Bloggers!

This is my Clerihew poem,  I hope you like it the video is how I made it soooo yeah


Here is the finished project




8 comments:

  1. Kia ora Karolina!


    Chris here, again. Tēnā koe for completing another task! Did you enjoy this one? You seem pretty happy doing all of your tasks!

    Great poem, not only does it meet the requirements of a clerihew, it also makes sense and is entertaining! Pai mahi! Thank you for your video explaining what you’re doing, and for embedding it correctly. That isn’t easy to do!

    Looking forward to seeing what you post over these last couple of weeks!


    Ngā mihi!
    Chris

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    1. Bula Vinaka Chris! I did enjoy this task, A LOT! I am very happy doing all these tasks it gives me something to do on the hloidays :) Happy to hear that you like my poem! No problemo I guess its good to explain stuff so people can understand :)

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    2. Glad to hear it, and yes it is good to explain stuff. I'm a teacher, so I spend my life explaining stuff!

      Ka kite,
      Chris

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  2. Kia ora Karolina. Thanks for sharing yet another awesome poem. What an interesting choice to share the whole process of creating your poem. I like the way you paused the recording while you were thinking. Do you think five minutes is a good length of time for a video? Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!

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    1. Bula Vinaka Hil- I mean Phil! I decided I wanted to shake things up and share how I made it! my honest thought on five minute video's are I think they are fine take your time and do it nicely

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    2. Maybe not Five minutes for what I was doing though!

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  3. Kia ora Karolina!

    What an inventive poem! The last line got me laughing!

    I also particularly enjoyed watching the whole creative process captured through your screencast. But I think Phil has a point. Sometimes you can lose the viewer after 3 mins...so perhaps you could think about using the Screencastify editing tools (or another video editor) to play around with "snipping" your video OR even using fast motion over the bits that are less important to your main purpose. Have you experimented with video editing?

    Nga mihi nui
    Naomi

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    1. Bula Vinala Naomi! Yeah I think Phil is right I actually haven't thought about editing these videos But i will take it to thought....

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